| Q: I have been searching the net for information
about writing comedy scripts. I have a nagging feeling that there are not
exactly the same considerations for comedy writing as for drama. What are
your thoughts on that? For example, my play (a comedy) doesn't have one
main plot with a resolution - rather, there are several stories being told
through various characters.
A: Ah, rules, rules, rules. I'm not familiar with any of the classic
playwriting "how-to" texts, and am somewhat distrustful of formulas--especially
for comedy. All I know I learned at the feet of Aristotle and at the School
of Theatrical Failure.
Can something be entertaining without a main story line? I suppose (a
lot of Robert Altman movies spring to mind) but my experience suggests
that a throughline--even a totally artificial one (cf Alfred Hitchcock)
is necessary for an audience to invest in the lives they see on stage.
Behaviour--funny, sad, peculiar, whatever--just isn't enough. As David
Mamet has observed: the only thing an audience cares about is "what happens
next? ". And to keep that particular train going, it seems to me you need
that hook. "Will Hamlet kill Claudius?" "Will Oedipus find out he killed
his father?" "Who shot JR?" Enquiring minds really do need to know.
Back to the questions
Secondly, how do I time my play from the printed
page?
I wouldn't worry about this too much. The play will be finished when
the characters have done their business. If the business takes long enough
to accomplish, you'll have an evening. If not, you've got something shorter.
You are creating a story, not typing up pages.
Back to the questions
G'day Bob, thanks for the service. I'm working on
an historical play set in the 17th century, and am intrigued by what you
leave in and what you leave out . . .
The good bits stay in, the bad bits go.
. . . Anyway, your thoughts on how to write a vibrant
play with an historical setting would be welcome. Greetings from Perth
Australia!
Context is all. The task is to create a world where you care about the
characters and their situation, and the conflict must obviously ring true
to a contemporary audience, and be something that they care about. Most
historical plays fail because the writer simply cannot comprehend that
all that fabulous research he finds so fascinating doesn't mean a fig to
the audience. The best historical drama --say "The Crucible" or, speaking
of Australia, "Our Country's Good"--make us care about the people. Burn
all the research--all of it--and start telling a story.
Back to the questions
I am working on a play that is contemporary and
would be considered controversial by conservative groups. How can I determine
where to submit, and which comes first: production or publication?
An issue with which I have some recent familiarity. Our theatre is located
in the most conservative part of Canada, and we just mounted Part One of
"Angels in America" . A lot of controversy came our way, and it provoked
a very interesting--and at times healthy--debate in our community. A happy
ending here--we played to 107% capacity and pre-sales for Part Two in the
spring are very strong.
As with submitting any script, I think you should be very familiar with
the theatre's mandate and their recent seasons. There is no point, in my
opinion, to sending a script to a theatre that has no track record with
new work, or, say in your case, submitting possibly contentious material
to a company that does middle-of-the-road murder mysteries.
Personally, I view publication of the script as merely a documentation
of the first production of the play. Our library shelves are littered with
scripts that no one has produced, and for the sake of our forests, I don't
think we need any more closet dramas wasting natural resources. A script
isn't a play until it has been produced.
Back to the questions
When you ask a playwright to rewrite part of her
script, how specific are you about the changes you want?
Hopefully, we are in the position that we are talking about not what
"I" want, but what the script needs. I'm not trying to impose anything
on the writer. It's not my play. If the playwright is sensitive to what
is going on in rehearsal, problems usually become apparent and together
we can identify a way to proceed. It can be very specific: "Why don't we
try cutting the last half of Actor A's line, so that Actor B can come in
sooner with hers". Or, "we're repeating an emotional beat in this section
that the audience has already experienced: don't you think we can lose
these three pages?" Or "These three scenes are redundant. It's just back
story that keeps us away from the action."
Or, my notes can be quite general. "I fell asleep in the second act,
and I didn't wake up until the train wreck. Is there something going wrong
in these twenty pages?"
Back to the questions
Also, what do you do when you and the playwright
can't agree on the kind or degree of script change that is needed?
I can be very persuasive. A large stick also helps. Ultimately, the
playwright always "wins". I've agreed to do the play, based on the draft
that I first read, and if changes don't happen there is not much I can
really do. Short of withdrawing from the production, or suggesting to the
producer that the play be pulled, we have committed to presenting the play.
If I'm proven "right" by the reception of the play by the audience, then
clearly I wasn't the director capable of convincing the writer of the correctness
of my choices. Chances are I won't be working with that writer again
Back to the questions
If you're directing a new play that doesn't work,
will you try to "fix" it in your production?
You bet. A carefully timed nuclear explosion always comes in handy.
As a director, my ultimate responsibility is to the audience, and they
deserve the best that my talent and that of my collaborators can provide.
The "fixes", though, rarely conceal the dross. But one can pretend. |